I have been learning how to use a diagram. I have worked and finished this piece of writing on how do bears hibernate? and its interesting on how bears hibernate. I found it easy to ctrl A ctrl C and ctrl V on to my blog. I found it tricky to write what i was gonna write and to make sure i all made sense. I found it hard to find atopic and figure out the right topic to write about. I enjoyed making a diagram and writing my 3 topic sentences. here is my diagram i have drawn hopefully you like it!
How Do Bears Hibernate?
Do bears eat or drink while hibernating? Well the answer is no they do not eat or drink when hibernating.
How long do bears hibernate for? Well they hibernate for five to seven months wow! That's a really long time!
When do bears hibernate? Well they normally hibernate in the winter but why do they hibernate in the winter though? And not in spring or summer? Well they only hibernate in the winter because the pressure for bears is really hard because there is only a small amount of food.
Kia ora. My name Zepria I attend from Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I liked how you put some facts about bears and i didnt know that bears don't drink and eat while hibernating. I liked your sketch of your bear! Because It's really creative and I liked how you added some labels to your sketch to tell your reader what the parts are! How did you sketch so good!?
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